Hi i´m Liriyah i´m 9 years old.
On Tuesday the whole School went to Rutherford to do cross country. First the whole school had to practice around the block until cross country got closer an closer. Rutherford track is twice as long as Carlton School´s block.
When the race was about to start, Miss Nation clapped these clapping things. Miss Nation tricked us a few times. Then she clapped the things all the 9 year old girls ran. I was coming 4th at first, then all of they started slowing down so I passed them. I came first! I felt so happy that I came first. My friend Madison came second place and my friend Willow came third place, my friend Maiah came fourth place.
Me Madison,Willow and Maiah are going to interschool cross country at Aranui school. I´m nervous and exited at the same time I´m more nervous. I bet you that everyone that is going is nervous. I am just so happy that I did well in cross country, I am proud of myself.
Hi Liriyah
ReplyDeleteI like your story because you used a lot of detail. I like that you used paragraphs.I also like that you told me how you felt after the race.
Hi Liriyah!
ReplyDeleteI like that you used paragraphs.I also like that you told me how you felt in the race. What place did you come in Interschools?